Egmont´s best and most creative Phantom writer Claes Reimerthi passed away

  23.7.2021 very soon after he resigned Egmont - but before this happened he still

   fullfilled his  promise about the amount of  manuscripts to do.   This final script

    was given to me and has been printed and here is the 1st page of the story. What

   Phantom works I got before and after that is told after the image of the page. 

                                                                                      

 

 My last work of Claes script`s first page

             BUT WHAT HAPPENED WHEN CLAES WAS GONE

           At the time when Claes was leaving Egmont (now Story House Egmont) he

          left behind only nine writers to make Pantom manuscripts, and only three

          were long time professionals who had made  many stories of The Walking

        Ghost. Them were from the  times of original  Fantomen Team,   carefully

         picked writers from few countries. Other writers nowadays were selected

      by editors who took care of the magazine after Ulf Granberg and shortly

   before Claes Reimerhi`s resignation there was MIkael Sol in that post.

        He had reserved for me the last manuscript which Claes was writing just

      the time before he leaving Egmont. But it took some time and Micke de-

    cide to sent me another script which was the first work of a new writer.

       This happened at the same time when another man was taking the place

     of Fantomen editor. So, when I got the script in my Email and had read it

     and checked the reference material  that came along the script I lost me

     interest totally to the manuscript  which really looked that it was coming

   from a novice writer. And the reference material, which was composed

     from pictures and looked useless mess because the story took place in

Africa about 1920  and the reference he had choose were mostly use-

less. For me the period was very familiar from  Johnny Weissmul-

ler´s Tarzan movies and I thought that whatsoever I could illustrate

that stupid story where Phantom spent most of the story laying un-

concious in a rotten sarcophagus in ruined village. A teenaged negro

boy took his place as main character of the bloody script emerging at

the end of very dull story as a hero of the story.

After few days when I tried to image what the drawing such of a story

was going to feel I contacted my boss MIcke and told that it was no use

that I took care of the script and he should give it to someone else´s

hands. Micke was just leaving his editorial post and said "OK", and told

that Andreas Ericsson was taking his place and would decide what to do

with the story. So Andreas, who already was handling my Wiggen-se-

rial´s album publication, said that OK,  he will give tha story to someone

else and that was it. I sighed from relief...

If you, dear reader of my STORY, are already thoroughly bored

of my careless way to handle my Phantom work and like to go to your

refrigerator to make some sandwiches etc. to read this story till it´s

end, here we go...

OK, almost the same time when I get rid of the first script of Egmont´s

new Phantom-story star Daniel Carlsson,     the last script from Claes

was sent to me and I had at last something to do. When I had  finished

the last story written by him and he had left Egmont for good, my new

boss Jacob , not knowing what had happened before ,mailed me another

script to take care.

IT WAS WRITTEN BY DANIEL CARLSSON !!!

I could not believe my eyes when I saw it in my Email. What wicked spi-

rits had found me to run me mad... Then I understood that Jacob did know

nothing about what had happened before,  and had sent me a new script

from their new writer. Here I sat before my computer staring the screen

helpless for a few seconds and thinking, what to do... It did not felt wise to

refuse so soon second time of a work which was offered to me...

I made a contact with Jacob and complained the abundant faults which

jumped out from the script when I did read it. And the referencies what

Carlsson had put with his script were again useless. In the story there

was only one tribe, but  samples he had digged out were at least four

different tribes starting from Zulus till Himba and Wakamba. But in the

story itself had the most stupid fault, because in his imaginary fairy

tale he had added real british regiment to have power in Bengali, the

country where Phantom lives. He called that regiment by real name

13th Light Hussars, but in reality it´s name has in 1809 whic was the

year what Carlsson was choosed 13th Light Dragoons and that regi-

ment was not even close to Africa  during that time. It has been in

England many years and 1809 it was shipped to Portugal where Na-

poleon has attacked.  There was plenty other faults in manuscript

which both me and Jacob tried to correct. He told me, that when he

had read that poor story first time he had made many corrections

already. We spent over a week trying to better Carlsson´s story,

but in vain. It was impossible to handle his clumsy action parts

etc. For me it took time to collect pictorial material for the story

and there occurred still a new vexation when Jacob got an Email

from King Features Syncate Inc. USA. They had decided to take

care Phantom production´s certain contents that no racism nor

pornographic images are involved. That´s why the artist who

illustarade a story must send them examples of the characters

of the story. So I was forced to do the same.

Here they are which was sent to New York.

The pictures were accepted and the

illustartion could be started, but...

I had got enough about the whole business with this rotten script and

told Jacob that he should give the whole mess to someone else to

work.

He said yes, he understood how I felt because he felt the same.

That´s it. Jacob told that he was expecting a manus from David

Bishop and will give that to me. I was grateful because I had

done a few Phantom stories from his scripts and know

what to expect...

The End of this mess

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